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Thursday 6 September 2018

The day it all went wrong

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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 14:30

    kamusta, Linny, I barely see your post and I am confused, Have you used HTML? probably you can use it next time and make it as an update, I think this needs a big emprovement

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  2. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 14:43

    Hola Linny, For some reason I cant see your post i can only see the title. But im sure its a great story!

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  3. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 14:45

    hi my name is Dylan i am in whakamanawa i dont even see the post maybe you should go back and improve it just a sajestion anyway

    blog you later:)

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  4. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 14:46

    Kia Ora Linny it's Tyler here from Gilberthorpe school.linny the title sounds okay and it pulls people in but to get them hooked in to the story you need to right some more writing and improve it

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  5. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 15:05

    Kia ora I'm Ethan H from Gilberthorpe school
    I liked the way you put some words and I looking forward to the story you are going to put down on the post. Did you think about putting some stuff of whats going to happen because there is not much words on you post. I've got a question what why did the day go wrong? But thats all I need to say so Bye!

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  6. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 15:10

    Kia Ora Linny, It is Kareem from Te Ropu Manawaroa.
    The interesting part was the title. This brought me back to when I did writing about the Day It All Went Wrong too. I dont know if you forgot to put writing or this is the day it all went wrong. Why did you not add any writing because lots of people are commenting to put your writing you could read your comments to get some feedback.



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  7. Anonymous18 September 2018 at 15:28

    What do you mean the day went wrong i saw nothing can you please put some more writing or a photo of the bad day because i see nothing please put some please. #MOREWRITING

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